Point~Blank Vs. RipStyle ~RipStyle wins LKO~

[Point~Blank]

ok
no dr hate crew votes
first to 5 wiins 3 0 ko
10 lines I spit first
deadline this tuesday

[RipStyle]

ok checkin
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[Point~Blank]

i think i may need to extend my own time limit lol sorry if u want the no show take it but if not can i have an extension {i have a course i neva knew i had}

[RipStyle]

sure man, ill expand
when ya need till?

[Point~Blank]

Thanks but i'll have time for it now i'll key 2 secs

[Point~Blank]

U Bout To Be Removed Of Ur Flesh Watch As I Burn This Faggot To Death
Police Find My English Book As Evidence, Realized U Got Killed Wit My Text
Lyrics Cause Style To Bleed, Cut Off Ur Whole Existance Wit Ease
Styles Shit Couldn't Be Dope, If His Diet Only Consisted Of Weed
Leave Sty Seekin A Gun, Watchin Me Unleash Numerous Shots
Force U To Call Me God, Cuz I'm Good To The Last Drop
How Can I Learn And Elevate?, When This Battles Not Even A Test
Cuz The Only Time U Pushin Weight Is When Ur Rearrangin Ur Bench Press
U Already Sweatin And Shakin, Hidin Behind Ur Curtains And Blinds
Style Couldn't Be Flippin The Script If This Actor Was Rehearsin His Lines

ok man thats it

[RipStyle]

very nice...

i got you gassed, i refracted the verbal shit outta your ass //
gas masks, this battle: your last, i STARTED and FINISHED you, your whole era has passed //

at POINT BLANK, this wank still manages to ACHEIVE NOTHING //
his attempts at rap, are whack like raps2sick paranoid, BELEIVING SOMETHING //

i have you STARING down the end of a BARREL, lust like your NAME suggests //
swarm infest, the POINT: detest, the RANGE and AIM: your chest, i have you sleeping dead with insects //

like wannabe war vets...you reacted to my pity based ACCEPTANCE //
your verses streak was weak adolescent, thats why i dont have to try with your BLANK defences //

learn the LESSONS, don't hesitate to ask me QUESTIONS, you have been SCHOOLED //
punks get tooled, fo' disobeying sty's RULES, like a tag-a-long, u ass is gone, you have been fooled //

Expo
ok...started n finished: sig
staring down barrel = point blank, his name
pity based acceptance, i accepted his callout
school references, hes a newbie

votes...

[ThE LyRiCaL PrOpHiT]

yo ima have ta say ripstyle took this one because....his punchs were better in my opinion an alot more creative,his flowed a lil nicer also i couldnt get into point blanks really...overall just came hittin harder...vote rip

[RipStyle]

1-0 uppin

[Stu]

Hard battle really. Point, some of ya punches were played, but you was more direct.
Rip, you was more complex and vocab was higher.
Overall on punches, Rip took this, came harder and more original.

Vote Rip

[Point~Blank]

damm i guess i'll be having my first ko

[KnOwLeDGe]

yo this was a good battle by both..............


point blank: yo u had a nice flow, no multis really, no metaz, and the punchlines u did have are a little played.........here are ur best lines.....

U Bout To Be Removed Of Ur Flesh Watch As I Burn This Faggot To Death
Police Find My English Book As Evidence, Realized U Got Killed Wit My Text

U Already Sweatin And Shakin, Hidin Behind Ur Curtains And Blinds
Style Couldn't Be Flippin The Script If This Actor Was Rehearsin His Lines

^ u started nice,fell off in the middle ending was ok but ive herd that concept too many times....no beef...nice drop.

Ripstyle-u had a couple of mutlis in ur verse, the flow was off too many fillers,heres some lines....

at POINT BLANK, this wank still manages to ACHEIVE NOTHING //
his attempts at rap, are whack like raps2sick paranoid, BELEIVING SOMETHING //

i have you STARING down the end of a BARREL, lust like your NAME suggests //
swarm infest, the POINT: detest, the RANGE and AIM: your chest, i have you sleeping dead with insects //

like wannabe war vets...you reacted to my pity based ACCEPTANCE //
your verses streak was weak adolescent, thats why i dont have to try with your BLANK defences //

these were proly ur best lines.....nuthin special but they were good.......

overall-this was an iight battle, it proly coulda been better but by an inch RIPSTYLES takes it.......1

[Point~Blank]

good battle i guess u knew the out come though lol props close this

[RipStyle]

ok man cool

[TrYp™]

aight ...1st of all weak and played out.

Punchlines - Ill give it a tie..
personals - Ripstyle- he got the point
multies - Ripstyle had a few, but wack
metaphors - none good
intro - no
outro - no
complexity - none shown
aggressiveness - Ripstyle kinda
excitement - it was boring


Analysis - come yo u guys gotta step it up.. Keep elevating, but ripstyle took it by a bit.

vote - Ripstyle

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[RipStyle]

.....thanks 4 encouragement
but no need 4 vote
i won
my bad 4got to change title
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