New Track!! LIFE!! PRODUCED BY ME

[bRiCc]

Rough Draft of a track im workin on for my album on some real shit i produced it also.

www.soundclick.com/bricc (http://www.soundclick.com/bricc)

feedback:
http://hip-hopkings.com/forums/showthread.php?t=11230





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-djgo

[DJGO]

no real hate*

I think the beat has potential..the drums need to be sharper and more up front the strings dominate too much. Your voice is even competing with it..drop the strings and bass to the backround, and maybe use a better snare and speed up the tempo a bit. The actuall song
when I fought to hear past the instrumental was aiight, the lyrics were deep and full... flow coulda of been better.


overall: 3/10 you gota get yah quality up


~1~

[bRiCc]

aite.. its a ruff draft buddy.. and as for quality mine shits one 99.9% of the kids on here so plz dont come talk to me about quality until yall get ya shit up and have suntin worth more than 10 bucks half the kids here dont even know wat monitors are.. anyway uppin for feed.. i know this shit is top notch its jus a ruff draft so i can get an idea of it im still adding 3 more verses on this but watever

[Deuce Wilde]

4 more verses....

[Renegade]

I don't think that the beat is that bad, i actually like it, the flow is off at some times, but the the content is good, The only thing i don't like is the hook play around with it..good job though

[bRiCc]

aite thankz man .. i know the flows off at times i was jus ruff draftin to get an idea like i said the real version gon have like 4 otha mcs on it so ya know wat it is... good lucks on the feedback.. bumpin

[bRiCc]

why the fuck is this in the beats thread? this is an audio.. fucktards