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poeticly_gifted_mami
31-01-2005, 05:15 AM
Lost love
You don’t love me nomore it shows everyday,
You don’t have to tell me that your love is fading away,
You got back with me cause you seen how sad I was without you,
And now you wanna make me miserable with you, So I can leave you and not grieve over you,
So you can stay with that bitch you cheated on me with,
I don’t give a fuck if I go to another and give all my love for you to him,
But it’s better said then done,
No matter what you’ll always be the one,
Unless I find someone better but I doubt that noone will ever replace you not even come close to, Maybe your ashamed by the way you do towards me,
But I cant just sit here and let you hurt me from your bullshit for too long,
Maybe one day you’ll wake up and realize that you were wrong,
But until then my heart will have to stay strong,
But soon I’ll have to carry on,
Me, myself, and I, what Beyonce said that’s true, It’s me that choose to love you,
Myself to blame for being hurt off of your bullshit, And I that has to gain enough strength to leave you,
I gotta do what I gotta do,
It’s be with someone and be in misery,
Or be with someone that makes me happy,
Ill figure it out one day,
But for now this is what I gotta say…..

chick rummy
02-02-2005, 04:45 AM
http://www.hip-hopkings.com/forum/viewtopic.php?t=1140


You don’t love me nomore it shows everyday
^once that happens nothing seems to go good no matter what..

Me, myself, and I, what Beyonce said that’s true, It’s me that choose to love you,
^yeah no doubt... sometimes u can only depend on urself.. u know..

But until then my heart will have to stay strong,
^damn thats hard to do.. when ur heart is broken.. by love.

nice drop.. keep on droping.. and make sure u follow da rules aight...

KnOwLeDGe
02-02-2005, 04:41 PM
yo ma im feelin this a lot, sounds like u put mad emotion into it, it wasn't boring either it kept me glued to the screen, nice drop keep em comin.......9/10

Stu
02-02-2005, 07:40 PM
Nice drop, I am feeling that.
Keep dropping and keep ya head up.
One

tru_pink_tearz
04-02-2005, 05:29 AM
Aight, nice shit...kinda sad but hot :I like it alot..keep it real and dont change your style!

Sir.Mercenary
17-02-2005, 10:10 PM
daymm what gotchu feeling down grl..some of us don't realized what we do to y'all til we lose everything..that was felt, keep ur head up....much respect
peace

Poetic Realness
17-02-2005, 11:26 PM
This was a very heartfelt piece, some of the lines the first guy qouted were the best, pure emotions is what this piece was all about...you have talent...keep writin with your pen...

NautyDevil
18-02-2005, 01:59 AM
I really like that.. Its really good... Keep that kind coming its real nice,