my song to my Grandpa ....RIP

[KnOwLeDGe]

i juss posted it....peep it and drop some feed...................http://www.soundclick.com/bands/9/knowlegeakauntouchablemusic.htm

[Killa Effect]

i liked it man nice deep track
beat went perfect with it
keep ya heat comin

[KnOwLeDGe]

good lookin out dawg...uppin....oh by the way heres my link of droppin feed..............http://hip-hopkings.com/forum/viewtopic.php?p=11918#11918

[Blue89]

Feelin this beat man it fits the subject foreal

Maybe an intro could work...Like talkin to ur Grandpa or God or watever

Vocals are good I can hear u perfectly

U not mumbling yo presence on the mic is good

Lyrics are pretty aight...Keep it up man u gettin there

~1~

[Eagle Eye]

aye man, beat is very nice, im not gonna evaluate the lyrics cus songs like this are from the heart and when people write them they aint thinking bout being complex just about saying wht they feel. Your Delivery is strong, good emotion in there aswel, Hook is very nice man, the addlbs worked very well, flow wise it was solid also, sometimes sounded slightly choppy but man this is a nice track. Good work! 8)

[Stu]

Very nice beat man.
Good delivery. Good lyrics and flow.
Nicely done.
One

[J-D]

gd shit, you and that beat worked well together

[KnOwLeDGe]

nething else on this

[DNA]

good mic presence, nice beat, decent flow overall...props

[Lexx]

#3 track ive listened to by you tonight... and once again-- better than the battle ish

flow is more on point-- its a little jumpier than the one you did with soul dude...

content good...
"he never gave in.... to see your face"
^ that verse was too stacato-- good break, nice attempt at a style change... but too "jumpy"

a few more verses you needed to smooth it out.. but overall good track.

keep this.. i cant stress enough... ive heard a few tracks from you before.. and yeah, it was clear you had talent, it still sounded too forced-- this however, is much better-- still needs ironing out- but thats easy enough to do.