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tru_pink_tearz
03-02-2005, 06:32 AM
Happy

I talked to you today
You made me feel good
The things you say
Makes me feel like I should

Once again I feel whole
You've put me back together
You gave back what you stole
I wish it will last forever

Suddenly it's all gone
You don't need me
I want you to move on
This is how it has to be

Once again it's all dark
I see no light
So with one little mark
I no longer fight

As I bleed once more
I see what true
You can call me a whore
But I still need you

In an instant I fell
My heart once again broken
I wish I could tell
But the word cant be spoken

I got my hopes up
In a second they we're not real
I guess Im not so tough
I'm scared stiff and still

I am scared of a girl
She knows it to
I'm scared of me
And what I might do

So I fucked up I understand
Good Night I love you
And I've lost my man
So I know what I gotta do

GO GET LAID!!!
nah...im a good girl, and all these poems are old, from when i was like 13 and madly in love with a losser that always made me feel like shit...so I went Soldier! I love tha thugs :wink:

Stu
03-02-2005, 07:11 PM
lol, nice happy poem girl.
Not bad, need work on some lines though.
Like expandin a lil.
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LowRider
04-02-2005, 12:41 PM
Nice rhyming scheme, good piece i was liking this, keep writing.