LowRider - Rainey Days

[LowRider]

Aight please dont mention the sound, i know my vocals are way quiet.
Besides that, any other critisism is welcome.
One1

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/6/l0wridermusic.htm

[Stu]

Nice beat like I said before man.
Yeah you def gotta sort the volume levels out.
Turn it up man.

Tight flow, could have better delivery man.
Not bad lyrics man, nicely workin the beat.
Hip-Hop Kings Demo? If we work on the lyrics and rerecord it, definately man.
One

[ThE LyRiCaL PrOpHiT]

niceeeee....but you sound like you aint feelin the beat...you know it sounds dumb but you gotta feel it....somehtin you can just bob yo head to and start spittin off the top to.....sounded like you did it to the beat cuz it was good not cuz you felt it but good drop....~1~love

[D.s.G.]

Yer! lol...

The beat is nice, I was feeling the singing by the chick in the hook...But I was not feeling the hook...you get me? The flow on the first verse was pretty nice, at times, I found the pattern and started bobbing my head...the second verse was slightly weaker and at times in the second verse, seems as if you were trying to find unique flow patterns, and you seem confused...1st verse was solid...8/10...second verse...6/10...Just polish the second verse and come back stronger on the second try...Oh yeah, lyrics were solid...7.3/10...Accent was NOT a problem!

D.s.G.

Oh yeah...you shouldnt rap on the hook...Let the sample/chick ride...it'll sound MUCH better TRUST!!

[LowRider]

Aight thanks for advice guys, im feelin this track so im just gonna tweak it and it will be track number one on the demo probably.
Thanks for advice for real, i will be expecting the same on the upcoming tracks.

[RipStyle]

damn
i no u did this bout 6 days ago
but i jus got round to listenin ther
nice man
cool beat
nice producing
ill rhymes
and like DsG said
accent was cool

overall
DoPe

[TrYp™]

aite u can do betta then this

[YDB]

Is there a reason you put an 'E' in Rainy?