Round 1 Nasty Stu vs. Marshal ~Nasty Stu LKO~

[Stu]

Welcome to The Genesis Tournament.
This is the first round of Hip-Hop Kings first tournament.
Here are the rules.
NO BITING, NO DICKRIDING OR HATING.
FEEDING OFF YOUR OPPONENTS VERSE IS ALLOWED.
CREW VOTES ARE ALLOWED.
ALL VOTE MUST BE EXPLAINED AND LAID OUT.
UNEXPLAINED VOTES WONT COUNT.
FIRST TO 5 VOTES WINS, 3-0 IS A LKO.
10 BARS MAXIMUM.
As it is Christmas and New Year Coming, we have a long deadline for the first round only.
Sunday 2nd January is the deadline.
Drop your verses when you are ready, Good Luck.
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[Stu]

Checking in, good luck.
Drop soon...
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[Stu]

Marshal doesnt matter, like Cam'ron to the ROC/
You dumb fuck, like Cheddarbob with a handgun to the cock/

Your not phat, you Slim and your rhymes are Shady/
Ill leave you bloody and messy like a new born baby/

Ill hammer the Nail In Your Coffin till you say Hail Mary/
Dawg you couldnt make no cheddar, even if you sell dairy/

You go through more name changes than a multi divorcee/
The only strap you wear, is in ya gay mass orgy/

You riding The Optimyztic like Schumacher to his Ferrari/
Ill leave you with more broken body parts than a destruction derby/

Your Like A Toy Soldier When The Music Stops/
Your nothin Without Me, like law without cops/

Upping for you verse....

[Marshal]

You wouldn't get a vic if you were a slave man,wading in the water
Your rep is fading like you're Potter, you're creating your fate kid like an otter
Your bogotry is useless,your open mic fictionry,excuseless,kid you're abuseless
Me torn? nah,how about your hands that you use to induce hits
This is a tight site,too bad you're the owner
cuz You couldn't spit hard,if your name was Boner.
You're lame,you've shown ire,the game has been sown sir in Hip Hop
but wack is in your dome,and kid you've just thrown mire
Eleven,yes,I'm killing you slowly,you call me homey,cuz u truly extol me
No glory for you,cuz it belongs to the LORD
phony you're threw like Wet thongs on the floor.

[LowRider]

Let me break it down..

Flow - Stu
Rhyming - Marshall
Vocab - Marshall
Personals - Stu
Punches - Stu
Wordplay - Stu
Complexity - Marshall
Multis - Stu

Marshall was OK, but it just wasnt hard hitting enough, i didnt see one personal punchline which is what the battle is about. More of a freestyle.
Stu was aggressive, plenty of wordplay and punches and personals which got the win.

MY VOTE - NASTY STU

[Kruwl aKa Isodope]

punches: a few from both but stu's were better
personals: stu's
wordplay: none
flow: stu

vote: stu

[RipStyle]

both were good,
but i felt stu's more
marshal is good but you hit harder than that b4,
stu got this

wordplay :stu had more impact
flow : def stu
personlas : ha stu
punches : stu's again hurt more

Vote : STU

[Testees]

Stu -
Marshal doesnt matter, like Cam'ron to the ROC/
You dumb fuck, like Cheddarbob with a handgun to the cock/
.: Wack using shit from 8 mile very simple line too:.

Your not phat, you Slim and your rhymes are Shady/
Ill leave you bloody and messy like a new born baby/
.: Way too simple agian and get off Em's dick with the refrences:.

Ill hammer the Nail In Your Coffin till you say Hail Mary/
Dawg you couldnt make no cheddar, even if you sell dairy/
.: Played dairy Lines have been since 2000 :.

You go through more name changes than a multi divorcee/
The only strap you wear, is in ya gay mass orgy/
.: Played again and not even decent:.

You riding The Optimyztic like Schumacher to his Ferrari/
Ill leave you with more broken body parts than a destruction derby/
.: this was ok but too simple:.

Your Like A Toy Soldier When The Music Stops/
Your nothin Without Me, like law without cops/
.: WACK!!! nuff said:.

Marshell -
You wouldn't get a vic if you were a slave man,wading in the water
Your rep is fading like you're Potter, you're creating your fate kid like an otter
.: WACK! not creative att all:.

Your bogotry is useless,your open mic fictionry,excuseless,kid you're abuseless
Me torn? nah,how about your hands that you use to induce hits
.: Blah at forced multies and no punch:.

This is a tight site,too bad you're the owner
cuz You couldn't spit hard,if your name was Boner.
.: OMG thank you took me back to the90's:.

You're lame,you've shown ire,the game has been sown sir in Hip Hop
but wack is in your dome,and kid you've just thrown mire
Eleven,yes,I'm killing you slowly,you call me homey,cuz u truly extol me
Too simple and forced multies:.

No glory for you,cuz it belongs to the LORD
phony you're threw like Wet thongs on the floor.
.: WTF dont make sense sorry:.


Vote - Stu ( cuz at least he made sense and threw punchez Nuff said )

[Stu]

Well that is a LKO, 3-0, well 4-0.

Nasty Stu advances.

~Closed~