Thesis Vs Ill~usion (3-0 KO Thesis-)

[Ill~usion]

4 bars due in a hour no feeding no biting..respected text heads only vote 400 post an up

[.Void.]

Noooo Doubt.

[Ill~usion]

test to see time

[Ill~usion]

thesis ..short definition..

sorta of essay based on research and not theory a dissertation on a particular
subject in which one has done original research, as one presented by a candidate for a diploma or degree
exp..2
Steven Hawkins thesis on the universe was destroyed when it was made fact that black holes did exist

1.
Ya Moms Gots the "Life of A Elephant" [fat], u thinking you hot In text or Gfx
Got me knowing yur "Nights are in Celebrant"
Dawg yur Slightly Irelevant , Claim you got "thesis" With No "Diploma or a Slight of Intellignece" :jawdrop:

2.
Whats ya Reason for Talkin , Bitch! I'll beat you wit a pistol
An have ya spirit never Reachin ya coffin
Fuck "Thesis" in a Black Hole
Facts our Dont mean 1's needed ..Ask the believin of Steven Hawkins

3.
In a audition yur ambitionz Aint from a criminal detour,
I subliminal Treat whores, like 50 Take that G Fictional T-shirt
So how can you Have a theory on anything tuff when you aint posses the Original Research

4.
I'll fuckin feed his organs to leechs,flush his orphan's in feces
Rippin this Thesis to pieces this ese "essay" so obese even his forehead has creases

[.Void.]

Edit*^Cough^ Thesis also sums up something in short ^Cough^

..He knows no reality, It wont take an acid trip to fool you..
!.I have kottenmouth yet Your too dry, 2nd fact: My SPIT will school you.!
..water flowing spirit,hear it?thats the sound when ya fear hits..
!.ima bull,control ya life the way i "steer" it.!
..I'll make this queer quit, a Quick battle to smash this fuck face..
!.Crying when i have his mommies cunt played, He's still a baby trying to duck AGE.!
..This fag couldnt ride a beat if it was called a ramming rod..
!.I touch souls and Minds, Your body's a tool for my punches to do Damage On.!

[~CoNCePt~]

thesis ..short definition..

sorta of essay based on research and not theory a dissertation on a particular
subject in which one has done original research, as one presented by a candidate for a diploma or degree
exp..2
Steven Hawkins thesis on the universe was destroyed when it was made fact that black holes did exist

1.
Ya Moms Gots the "Life of A Elephant" [fat], u thinking you hot In text or Gfx
Got me knowing yur "Nights are in Celebrant"
Dawg yur Slightly Irelevant , Claim you got "thesis" With No "Diploma or a Slight of Intellignece" :jawdrop:

2.
Whats ya Reason for Talkin , Bitch! I'll beat you wit a pistol
An have ya spirit never Reachin ya coffin
Fuck "Thesis" in a Black Hole
Facts our Dont mean 1's needed ..Ask the believin of Steven Hawkins

3.
In a audition yur ambitionz Aint from a criminal detour,
I subliminal Treat whores, like 50 Take that G Fictional T-shirt
So how can you Have a theory on anything tuff when you aint posses the Original Research

4.
I'll fuckin feed his organs to leechs,flush his orphan's in feces
Rippin this Thesis to pieces this ese "essay" so obese even his forehead has creases




you stayed consistant for the most part through all of this spit one maybe 2 filler lines but even they were able to lead up to what ya punches were.... ya flow was a lil choppy at times but overall the punches and creativity of this was nice.... i will have to say your definition of thesis was slightly off tho which brought this spit down cuz when ya spittin under false information it doesnt help ya battle man check everything next time to make sure ya 100% right.....

http://www.google.com/search?hl=en&defl=en&q=define:thesis&sa=X&oi=glossary_definition&ct=title

^several definitions of thesis



Edit*^Cough^ Thesis also sums up something in short ^Cough^

..He knows no reality, It wont take an acid trip to fool you..
!.I have kottenmouth yet Your too dry, 2nd fact: My SPIT will school you.!
..water flowing spirit,hear it?thats the sound when ya fear hits..
!.ima bull,control ya life the way i "steer" it.!
..I'll make this queer quit, a Quick battle to smash this fuck face..
!.Crying when i have his mommies cunt played, He's still a baby trying to duck AGE.!
..This fag couldnt ride a beat if it was called a ramming rod..
!.I touch souls and Minds, Your body's a tool for my punches to do Damage On.!

ya flow and shit was good man you just need to stay a lil more consistant wit the punches ya wordplay was creative ya personals were nice bout how he ducked age in the chatbox after sayin so much shit bout them battlin n then he ducked but you could have gone into alot more man but overall this was a decent drop too

i'm goin to have to make this a tie for me ...... thesis had some good personals and a few dope lines Ill~usion had some dope concepts of pumches tho

Vote: Tie

you can check those definitions and if im worng and his definitions are in their (cuz i only looked at all of them quickly) then let me know



0-0 (cuz ties arnt votes) Uppin for votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Sunny]

Flow - Thesis
Punches - Tie
Multis - Didnt see any so tie
Personals - Thesis
Nameplay - Ill
Enjoyment - Tied

My Vote for : Thesis

Overall hot battle thesis ur lines were hot but didnt seem like a battle verse.. While ill had more shots towards you.. But you still kilt him with the personals well there was basically one in ur verse nd ill kilt you with the nameplay.. Good battle

Favorite Lines :

Ill-

1.
Ya Moms Gots the "Life of A Elephant" [fat], u thinking you hot In text or Gfx
Got me knowing yur "Nights are in Celebrant"
Dawg yur Slightly Irelevant , Claim you got "thesis" With No "Diploma or a Slight of Intellignece"

Thesis-

!.ima bull,control ya life the way i "steer" it.!
..I'll make this queer quit, a Quick battle to smash this fuck face..
!.Crying when i have his mommies cunt played, He's still a baby trying to duck AGE.!

[Treysun.]

punches: i'll give it a tie...both were decent
multis: ill-usion
creativity: thesis
structure: thesis
personals: thesis


Favorite Lines :

Ill-

1.
Ya Moms Gots the "Life of A Elephant" [fat], u thinking you hot In text or Gfx
Got me knowing yur "Nights are in Celebrant"
Dawg yur Slightly Irelevant , Claim you got "thesis" With No "Diploma or a Slight of Intellignece"

Thesis-

!.ima bull,control ya life the way i "steer" it.!
..I'll make this queer quit, a Quick battle to smash this fuck face..
!.Crying when i have his mommies cunt played, He's still a baby trying to duck AGE.!

vote: thesis

both verses were pretty decent...only real prob i seen wit illusion is his concepts against the name "thesis" were ji kinda worn out and boring...the first bar was worded well tho..for a play on his name that is...still a old concept on his name tho....thesis gets the vote because he basically expanded in all categories and had a more polished verse overall decent battle

[.Void.]

3-1 or 2-0 however you count cons vote Up!!

[~CoNCePt~]

2-0 uppin for votes..... i said this already lol

[Ill~usion]

LMFAO BUHAHAHA

[R.Y.A.N.O.]

Personals - Thesis
Flow/Structure - Thesis
Creativity - Ill
Multis - IIll
Punches - Thesis
Personals - Thesis
Nameplay - Ill
Enjoyment - Thesis (very close)

Vote - Thesis

[.Void.]

Thats 3-0 KO? Or keep going...

[Ill~usion]

this site got soem dickriders like a bitch thesis for yur amusement you know u aint had a chance

i can post this on 3 mutual sites so u can see yur real outcome but im sure u know what it was




buhahahah

[.Void.]

...W.e bro.

[Ill~usion]

considering yru decent i mean that its embarrassing u wont admit u lossed but im sure u know it you can tell by the inconsitency of these votes buhahah an that they thought u had punchlines or creativty


you need metaphores bruh some complexity stay up the kid do your thang

[.Void.]

LMFAO dude are you serious?

[Reno Reigns Supreme]

Ya Moms Gots the "Life of A Elephant" [fat], u thinking you hot In text or Gfx
Got me knowing yur "Nights are in Celebrant"
Dawg yur Slightly Irelevant , Claim you got "thesis" With No "Diploma or a Slight of Intellignece"

this was nice

2.
Whats ya Reason for Talkin , Bitch! I'll beat you wit a pistol
An have ya spirit never Reachin ya coffin
Fuck "Thesis" in a Black Hole
Facts our Dont mean 1's needed ..Ask the believin of Steven Hawkins

ehh forced

3.
In a audition yur ambitionz Aint from a criminal detour,
I subliminal Treat whores, like 50 Take that G Fictional T-shirt
So how can you Have a theory on anything tuff when you aint posses the Original Research

this was coo

4.
I'll fuckin feed his organs to leechs,flush his orphan's in feces
Rippin this Thesis to pieces this ese "essay" so obese even his forehead has creases

ehh just filler

overall had two good punches the rest was just ehh



..He knows no reality, It wont take an acid trip to fool you..
!.I have kottenmouth yet Your too dry, 2nd fact: My SPIT will school you.!

this was nice

..water flowing spirit,hear it?thats the sound when ya fear hits..
!.ima bull,control ya life the way i "steer" it.!

very simple..ehh

..I'll make this queer quit, a Quick battle to smash this fuck face..
!.Crying when i have his mommies cunt played, He's still a baby trying to duck AGE.!

i dont know if this is a personal but sounds like it.....havent been on the site that long but if its referring to age the artist nice line if not then its ok

..This fag couldnt ride a beat if it was called a ramming rod..
!.I touch souls and Minds, Your body's a tool for my punches to do Damage On.!

ehh just filler man nothin hard hittin

overall had a couple of lines like homeboy did


My vote: tie....both came ok no real consistancy in this battle at all just alot of filler and a couple good punches just my honest vote

[shogun]

dude...is it me or does this kid always say the same shit?

"mutual site" this "blah blah blah" that

kid...get out that netcee mentality "you need metaphors and complexity"

your verse cant even be spit to a beat with that choppy ass netcee flow young'n

take your L...and shut it...whining just makes you look mad gay

[Ill~usion]

sho gun you seriously proving a point youve been hating really yur point doesnt matter your a whack fuck yes it cant be sopit to a beat actually its not spit to a beat its text dip shiii BUHAHAH dude you got age quotoables in yru sig OMFG BUHAHAHA



smfh someoen show me the illeterate shii of thsi clown with fake personals im ducking age how when are battles due tuesday an ive beat him alrready smfh

[.Void.]

*cough* READ THE VERSE FAGGET *cough*
It says TRIED to duck aGe. Dumbass.

[~CoNCePt~]

~closed~

3-0 KO Thesis-

an infraction has been given to Ill~usion for the bullshit thats commin out his ass... excuse me i mean face (sorry i get confused) if it continues it will be broght up to the admins.....

you dont like how the site is run illusion you have so much to say bout how you lost y dont you leave... wouldnt be any skin off our back just 1 less wack netceee....