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InTrIcAtE LoGiC
14-04-2005, 11:16 PM
If ur UK Proud listen to this tune.
Just so you americans know, this isn't beef, i'm just laying down a point.
The tune is about the UK and its position.
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/8/intricatelogicmusic.htm
sorry if it doesnt work, but i only just uploaded it, so wait 24hrs and then give it a listen,
and please..........please............can you gimmie some feedback, no1 does, u guys just listen and move on, don't.
Peace I.L.
Kruwl aKa Isodope
16-04-2005, 06:15 PM
nice stuff matt, i think you have to work on your lyrics a bit more, an you have same thing i do. we need to put more emotion into a track? nice stuff, hope your havin fun makin beats!
pZ
Nice beat. Repping the UK for life!! One Love..
Too long of an intro. Tight flow and mic pressense. Some nice lines in there.
I got a track like this also.
One Love
InTrIcAtE LoGiC
17-04-2005, 06:43 PM
thanks for the feed, stu if u wanna collab on a beat that would be cool, we gotta represent
peace I.L.
lyrical_impak
17-04-2005, 09:17 PM
when you say "yo" at the begining...kinda like your eating your mic.
its pretty good but like kruwl said you need to put more emotions in it.
good drop
The beat is cool, and some of your lyrics are good...need a lil more emotion but ur sounding better on the mic than ur first drops...keep elevating man
when you say "yo" at the begining...kinda like your eating your mic.
Lmao yea i thought that i was like woahhh
was ok u sound a bit robotic loosen those shoulders mayyyyynnnee
I like your accent, you work it well...
your flow is decent, altho it sounds at times that your vocals were just layed over a random beat... also, you sound bored at times...
Lyrical content, was also decent, altho I feel you could have said more, when you went on about the gun culture of american hip hop...
keep on.
and get excited next time. lol
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