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Decguin
16-04-2005, 09:53 AM
i never felt agony until you broke me
and i never understood heartache
but now the skies are filled with clouds
and the rain seems to fall free
i cant help but sit and stare
as all of my emotions turn so cold
did you think youd have this impact?
did you know id still sit lonely
i fell off this ledge so hard
now im wondering how ill get back
you broke me and brought along the agony
but im now relishing in the dark
the tears may flow down my cheek
but not because im in pain from this
only because ive slowly fallen in love
fallen in love with being so weak
so once again im coming back to you..
will you break me yet again?
i need to feel the love of your hurt
i want to feel the pain you give
please make the rain stay forever
so give me the agony and hurt
i know youve saved it all for me
im asking for it now so give away
its intoxicating the way it pains
like a drug that im craving
your love that seems to burn inside
the love that brings hurt to my veins
let me take it all in and swallow it down
i never felt agony until you broke me
and i never understood love...
until you broke me...

DNA
16-04-2005, 05:31 PM
wow...some real deep stuff here Dec...the repetition is powerful and the vocab is perfect for conveying the emotion....really nice poem...

Stu
17-04-2005, 03:27 PM
Damn, that is a very deep poem. Great emotion displayed.
This is a great poem man.
One

Malicious Intent
18-04-2005, 06:57 PM
yeah i think tht it was a really good poem even if u did rip mine "poem" to shredders keep it up

Decguin
19-04-2005, 08:14 AM
yeah i think tht it was a really good poem even if u did rip mine "poem" to shredders keep it up

*sighs*

kid do you know what its like to see your first true love tortured and mutilated? poetry was and is my true love.. it is the only thing on this board i do that i take serious.. its about the only thing i write with all of my passion and soul.. and to see what alot of you people do to it.. its like having someone send me a video tape of my love being raped and molested till it can no longer live on..

Malicious Intent
20-04-2005, 09:06 AM
OK then lets jst forget about this then