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Cap G
23-12-2004, 12:18 AM
I walk this cracked sidewalk called life,
It's bumpy but it's alright, I'm makin my way,
Tryin everday, ta keep Satan away,
And altho some be hatin the day, life ends
I'm tryin to embrace life man, even life's end
So I'm searchin, writin, burnin, mics and,
Givin u what I've found on my journey
Thus far, and thus far it got me turning,
This way and that way, I'm straight up lost,
But I ain't gonna fade off course,
I'ma make the playoffs dawg, just,
Gimme some time, life ain't what I want just yet,
That's not to say I ain't coolin on my set,
I'm coolin on my set! I'm cool with it yes,
And if the grind is all I'm designed to have,
I understand, but yo, my rhymes is crack!
Can't knock that, I feel like, after what I been thru,
I gota come up, it's just that simple..
I'm searchin.

(scratched in, use your imagination)
Searchin (X5)

It's like...I'm at a crossroads, I'm either,
Gonna make it lose it, or neither.
17 and my feet hurt, I got a fever
I'm hot as shit, but lost and shit,
Which ways up, which ways down?
Which ways the crown, which ways proud?
All I know is, I want my shit played loud
But a rapper? Is that, really my career?
Is that, really my idea, of makin it?
Rakin in dough, hoes exposin nakedness
At shows, I duno but yo, I'ma keep tryin,
Cuz I can feel sumthin in me, deep cryin,
Yearnin for more in this life,
More than this strife, of everyday life;
More than the grind, more than a rhyme,
I wanna swim with dolphins, callin,
Home from some island phone, ballin
Eternally chillin, spillin liquor,
With no schedule fixtures, no misters,
Just names, dames, games, blaze, and praise
Hey, it can happen can't it? Fuck the status quo,
I'ma rise above it all, n be the baddest yo,
Even tho I love it all, I want out the system,
I wanna find heaven like a devout christian,
Heaven on earth...that's the search

http://hip-hopkings.com/forum/viewtopic.php?t=166

my first drop dont clown me pleez!

Stu
24-12-2004, 07:04 PM
Nice flow and structure man.
Could work on vocab and rhyming though man.
Just keep writing and elevating.
One

RipStyle
04-01-2005, 08:17 PM
yea nice 1st drop def

alot of ppl aitn that good

keep at it

EpiC
08-01-2005, 10:24 PM
this had good flow an structure but the rhymin an vocab could of been betta....
jus keep elevatin...

Kruwl aKa Isodope
09-01-2005, 02:47 PM
nice drop, okay flow structure was nice. keep at it an u will get better. drop some feed on my collab with chick rummy called poetic justice. peace