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HOOD CHRONICLES
27-04-2005, 07:42 AM
It takes a strong man to pick
himself up when he falls,
though, embarrased, in pain
and bewildered by a sudden change
in position, he sums up all he is,
to grab himself by the shirt and lift
his mind body and soul, also
his manhood, pride, and ignorance
from the dirt of the path
he had been walking,
that strong man,
ripped muscles,
deep voice,
unmeasurable stature
facial hair
and
a half wit knowledge
of the world surrounding him,
has falled,
**gasp**
no one expected his down fall,
he seemed to be so balanced,
there appeared to be nothing
wrong with his mechanics
but he fell,
stumbled
tripped
and ended up flat on his face
no one expected him to fall,
but being a real man
he picked himselft up,
re-evaluated his steps
and started walking again
A real man walks

Stu
28-04-2005, 09:05 PM
This was good man.
Im feelin the concept, and you stuck to it well.
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