Round 1 Combo vs. Sir T ~Sir T LKO~

[Stu]

Welcome To The First Round Of Urban Warfare.

Rules:

NO BITING.
NO CREW VOTES
NO DICKRIDING
NO HATING
NO RECYCLING
10 BARS MAX, 6 BARS MIN
3-0 LKO
FIRST TO 5 OTHERWISE

Voting:

ALL VOTES MUST BE EXPLAINED AND IN DETAIL, OR THEY WILL NOT COUNT
VOTERS MUST HAVE 15+ POSTS
ALL DICKRIDING/HATING VOTES WILL NOT COUNT

Deadline:

I ASK ALL EMCEE'S CHECK IN BEFORE DROPPING THEIR VERSE
SUNDAY 8TH MAY 2005 IS THE DEADLINE
ANY PROBLEMS, CONTACT ME.

Killa Effect : cuzimapimp35@hotmail.com
Sir T : timwaters2004@yahoo.co.uk

Good Luck

[SIR-T]

This Is My Check

[Combo]

And This Is Mine..I'm taking Killa Effect's place...



So we 'meet again',Look only in tha Pen' will u eva "Beat A Man''
I'm taking u 'Outta The Tourney',Sir-T,u're too lovey,You Ought To Be Barney'
Something's wrong! He's always Battling a Man,This Average Fan's 'gotta be Horny'-
haha There's Gonna Be Harm B,Spitting Gay dung like ya do in ya raps?You must be
One Wit The Army',I'm like 'Saw', if ya want blood? Rip Off Ya Arm G',cuz when u spit
there's 'No Life In Ya lyrics' They're Weeds In this farm g,I'm probably gonna see a Novel
with Big Letters like Barnes N Noble,Like Blind People,No one can stand to see ya Garbage Flow Fool
Man I'm a rip ya letters dawg since no one's 'Feeling U',You're like the Skin Of a potato,and I'm Peeling U
you're unapealing too,Boring N Wack,we dislike u folk,Quit Pouring Ya Plaque,No One's Adoring U Jack
Except D/r voters Exploring Ya sack

[SIR-T]

my heat will stop your heart, you get left in com-bol-tions, and thats the truth, make you collapse on the floor bleeding and foamin from the mouth, like substance abuse

cus you substance allready been used, said basically the same shit last time i battled this man, fool so played he couldent be original if worthers wrote down his battle plans

and he writes his lyrics down on the computer, everybody knows he masturbate with the pen, then again you a faggot, made more queers perspirate than sure for men

god forgives his sins, believe me thats the only reason if he ever goes jail
everybody listen, this guys heros the end of the cock, he allways gettin saved by the bell

im ill, but you improved, combo is it me or have got a lot better quickly
youve either bitten your lyrics, or im just seeing things pissed from this century matured bottle of whisky

to put it simply, ive came away a victor again ,easilly put this anus to end
couldent imagine too beat me, if you were asleep, day dreaming about winning again

[Da Alpha Male]

Combo:
So we 'meet again',Look only in tha Pen' will u eva "Beat A Man''
I'm taking u 'Outta The Tourney',Sir-T,u're too lovey,You Ought To Be Barney'
Something's wrong! He's always Battling a Man,This Average Fan's 'gotta be Horny'-
eehhhh, decent opener, but da wordplay was terrible
haha There's Gonna Be Harm B,Spitting Gay dung like ya do in ya raps?You must be
One Wit The Army',I'm like 'Saw', if ya want blood? Rip Off Ya Arm G',cuz when u spit
there's 'No Life In Ya lyrics' They're Weeds In this farm g,
betta..MUCH betta, could've hit harder tho
I'm probably gonna see a Novel
with Big Letters like Barnes N Noble,Like Blind People,No one can stand to see ya Garbage Flow Fool
LoL..da Barnes n Noble line was clever, but "See" lines r play'd
Man I'm a rip ya letters dawg since no one's 'Feeling U',You're like the Skin Of a potato,and I'm Peeling U
dis 1 was nice b, but u're still notpunchin dis nigga
you're unapealing too,Boring N Wack,we dislike u folk,Quit Pouring Ya Plaque,No One's Adoring U Jack
Except D/r voters Exploring Ya sack
That was ur best line in punch in dis battle, but it's almost waste'd, cuz the rest were weaker

Overall:
Mostly u were jus throwin jabs and in battle, especially, a tourney u HAVETA nail fuckaz, knockout all opponents..u've had betta verses b4, i think u're 1st verse against T was even betta..PLUS, waht's wit da Yellow shit? Anyway, ur wordplay was heavily forced, flow was decent, 4 text, so 5/10


Sir-T:
my heat will stop your heart, you get left in com-bol-tions, and thats the truth, make you collapse on the floor bleeding and foamin from the mouth, like substance abuse
i'm guessin u meant convulsions wit da 1st line..anyway, deso opener
cus you substance allready been used, said basically the same shit last time i battled this man, fool so played he couldent be original if worthers wrote down his battle plans
ehhh, maybe word'd betta it would've hit hard as it was suppose to?
and he writes his lyrics down on the computer, everybody knows he masturbate with the pen, then again you a faggot, made more queers perspirate than sure for men
actually Sure is deodorent..so it STOPS perspiration, but OK, i get da point
god forgives his sins, believe me thats the only reason if he ever goes jail
everybody listen, this guys heros the end of the cock, he allways gettin saved by the bell
again, ur wordin fuck'd up da impact
im ill, but you improved, combo is it me or have got a lot better quickly
youve either bitten your lyrics, or im just seeing things pissed from this century matured bottle of whisky
u were jus basically talkin shit here, not punchin
to put it simply, ive came away a victor again ,easilly put this anus to end
couldent imagine too beat me, if you were asleep, day dreaming about winning again
LoL..a real nice closer, but punches like that should've com earlier n more often

Overall:
u pretty much had the same problem Combo had u were throwin jabs not heavy knockout punches..ur 1 advantage was the fact that u were more original, however minut that edge was it help'd...so 6/10

Verdict:
I gave it T da edge simply cuz he was clver n slightly more original, T's jabs land'd betta, also his flow was smoother, his swagger somewhat show'd, whereas Combo came off FORCE'd alotta time. Usually i decide mostly on punches, but eitha nail'd da otha, so in-turn i vote'd on technique alone and T has betta tech, so Vote - Sir.T~ALpHa!~

[Stu]

Okay, Sir T got this in my opinion.
He came with more original, harder and clever punches.
Flow was there, and the experience attitude.
Combo, yours was rushed and weak to your normal standard.

Vote Sir T

[DNA]

So we 'meet again',Look only in tha Pen' will u eva "Beat A Man''
I'm taking u 'Outta The Tourney',Sir-T,u're too lovey,You Ought To Be Barney'
Something's wrong! He's always Battling a Man,This Average Fan's 'gotta be Horny'-
haha There's Gonna Be Harm B,Spitting Gay dung like ya do in ya raps?You must be
One Wit The Army',I'm like 'Saw', if ya want blood? Rip Off Ya Arm G',cuz when u spit
there's 'No Life In Ya lyrics' They're Weeds In this farm g,I'm probably gonna see a Novel
with Big Letters like Barnes N Noble,Like Blind People,No one can stand to see ya Garbage Flow Fool
Man I'm a rip ya letters dawg since no one's 'Feeling U',You're like the Skin Of a potato,and I'm Peeling U
you're unapealing too,Boring N Wack,we dislike u folk,Quit Pouring Ya Plaque,No One's Adoring U Jack
Except D/r voters Exploring Ya sack


Okay you had a decent set of ideas but in some places the flow was horrible....your punches were played really although there was decent ones e.g. the last one....agree with Alpha this is a 5/10




my heat will stop your heart, you get left in com-bol-tions, and thats the truth, make you collapse on the floor bleeding and foamin from the mouth, like substance abuse

cus you substance allready been used, said basically the same shit last time i battled this man, fool so played he couldent be original if worthers wrote down his battle plans

and he writes his lyrics down on the computer, everybody knows he masturbate with the pen, then again you a faggot, made more queers perspirate than sure for men

god forgives his sins, believe me thats the only reason if he ever goes jail
everybody listen, this guys heros the end of the cock, he allways gettin saved by the bell

im ill, but you improved, combo is it me or have got a lot better quickly
youve either bitten your lyrics, or im just seeing things pissed from this century matured bottle of whisky

to put it simply, ive came away a victor again ,easilly put this anus to end
couldent imagine too beat me, if you were asleep, day dreaming about winning again




Much better flow and vocab here....however your punches weren't much better....I'm giving this a 7 as it flowed well and I really liked the last bar....however I have seen you come much harder than this....7/10


Vote - Sir-T

[Stu]

Sir T wins 3-0 LKO.
3 Points and through to the next round.

~Closed~