Freestyle

[Doughboy]

Takover Beat (Getting LOuder)

Man we Run New York City/
but we don't do it through races like my nigga Puff slash diddy/
fuck trying snuff me niggas trying to rub me out/
so if you look at me wrong you might end up with a gun in your mouth/
then I go south to your chest my aim ain't the best so you might catch a few slugs/
got thugs with no compassion/
fuck this shit I don't need music turn of the beat say something wrong you'll here my gat rapping/
see bam rhymes with bang nigga I don't fight other nigga I'm not a member of da band/
See we run new York city/
See no one can see its time to build up my crew/
you're wack we're fresh and new/
you're falling of like an untigtend screw/
your the abinomation fuck you yeah Jesus love me this I know thats why I was blessed these amazing skills and like the white boys would say a narly flow/

[Stu]

I liked this one better man, better flow, structure and punches.
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[DoubleH]

yea man this freestyles straight man 4/5 keep it up

~pz~

[Doughboy]

Thanks


Queens we in the building

[LowRider]

Not bad man for an intro, plenty of metas and some cool punches, try get some mad multis in there, and step up the vocab a little, you into audio yet?
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