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DNA
08-05-2005, 12:16 PM
Loup Garou - http://www.hip-hopkings.com/forums/showthread.php?t=3668

If there is a holy spiritual being then I reject it//
It is powerless and weak from my perspective//
It has done nothing to solve the earths pain//
It has never shown me beyond death’s curtain//

Who are you to question my reasons my child//
I gave mankind free will, and so they are defiled//
They could have created a paradise on this planet//
But you pollute with filth, you turn nature rancid//

We are what we are by the people who we met//
‘God’ or whatever has never helped me to forget//
The pain I felt, only my family and my friends//
I despise thee till the day that my life ends//

Why do you despise me, what did I do//
I gave you freedom, this is how you grew//
You cannot hate me for I gave you existence//
I showed humanity the way through visions//

I didn’t ask to be born, yet you created me//
And I have now seen and realized belatedly//
That if you made me your responsible for me//
You’re the one who wrote my life story//

No my son, I merely gave you pen and paper//
I took you as a baby and made you safer//
I let you be born into a life of comfort//
You don’t need to fight like some fought//

I fight now because I was born that way//
I grew up so sheltered and totally happy//
So when the real world intruded on my mind//
It was filled with pain I was shocked to find//

Your not a fighter, your upbringing saw to that//
I gave you talent to make others laugh or to rap//
But you will never be the revolutionary you dream//
Your born a subject and you’ll die under the queen//

I am what I make myself, if I have the courage//
I fight for others freedom because I love it//
If you did make me, I’m Frankenstein now//
Insane and out to kill you in front of crowds//

Why do you desire my death, what have I done//
I saw your life and never interfered since day one//
You want your freedom yet hold me responsible//
For giving you life and a birth in the hospital//

I need to know that if you are real that you care//
Otherwise we as a race would be given to despair//
If you gave us true freedom, then I wouldn’t be here//
Freedom is death and I know finally see that clear//

White is me the Red is God

This is a lil more deep than it seems at first glance, especially towards the end...if you understand what I'm getting at, good for you...

Stu
08-05-2005, 01:25 PM
Shit thats deep man. One of your better ones def.
Feeling this a lot.
One

RipStyle
08-05-2005, 02:08 PM
daaaaaaaaamn...
that was DOPE
very nice man i was feeling this alot...
reminded me of Interview With The Vampire (Ras)
but still, this was ill...
props man i liked that
~1

Kruwl aKa Isodope
09-05-2005, 06:14 PM
OI THAT WAS LIVE!! good shiz Che, i like it. good meaning, got message across

pZ

RipStyle
09-05-2005, 08:07 PM
word...
lol @ ''OI''

DNA
09-05-2005, 10:26 PM
Lol...thanx kids....upping for some more feed!

J-D
09-05-2005, 10:37 PM
for sure very good poem dude nice work

LowRider
10-05-2005, 01:02 AM
Nice man, when you showed me on msn it was developing into a real nice poem, you kept your depth and consisteny right until the end so props for that. Keep dropping poetry man you write some cool stanzas.

Low-D
10-05-2005, 05:07 AM
yeah nice work bro..

keep em comin

pz

G~Prime
11-05-2005, 04:48 AM
damn this was nice...
i dont have much to say this was pretty much on point from every view...

ill look forward to seeing more from you

DNA
11-05-2005, 09:03 AM
Thanks for the love peeps....

Thomas
18-05-2005, 08:10 PM
Tis' A Cool Concept

On "Interview With A Vampire" - Ras Kass

He Talks To God And Satan About Lifes Questions

Shit Is WHOA

thelyricalone
27-05-2005, 08:27 AM
ayo this was nice kid shit was dope like tha subject aint heard nuttin like this in a minute stay doin ya thang 1

Bianca-Trish
07-06-2005, 09:00 AM
Che.... that was a real piece of art!.... bloody deep... i loved it x

Malicious Intent
08-06-2005, 03:34 PM
well done che that was really good
deep shit

Pz

Emcee Sake
08-06-2005, 03:36 PM
damn man that shit hit home, felt it hard by the way homie when we gonna talk politics

Da Alpha Male
09-06-2005, 09:18 AM
dat was ALMOST genius..LoL j/k, dat was pretty iLL Che, da best I'VE seen from u ~reSpeKt!~

HOOD CHRONICLES
27-06-2005, 07:46 AM
That Was A Nice Piece Feelin It Al The Way