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Stu
07-01-2005, 06:49 PM
Still rough, but hey..

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/3/nastystumusic.htm

Feedback?
BOFH1971
08-01-2005, 05:00 PM
Mic is too high, distortin. and drowning out the music too much, you seem to be also concentrating too much on the words and are not flowing as much with the beat as you should.
However this style has been done before where a poem is read over a jazz track.

gotta spend some time getting those settings just right.

delivery is confident , and forceful

nice.
Stu
08-01-2005, 07:55 PM
Thanks, I was tryin to work on the delivery for this track.
Next version of this will be the finished piece.

Anymore feedback?
BOFH1971
09-01-2005, 01:07 AM
Get in
there was nothing wrong with the delivery on that one
just the volume setting

I await the finished product :)
Stu
09-01-2005, 01:27 PM
lol, Im using a different beat for the final version.
Coming soon as I purchased it, lol.
Any more feedback?
Killa Effect
09-01-2005, 03:24 PM
yea turn the mic down a lil n try n spit your words clearly other then that man u did a damn good job
Stu
09-01-2005, 03:40 PM
Dont you think the delivery is clear?
Thanks for the advice.
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Killa Effect
09-01-2005, 03:46 PM
yea but sum words i couldnt understand u but i mean not all them u were spiting clearly then after a lil while u kinds slipt but other then that its good stu
Stu
09-01-2005, 03:50 PM
Yeah, I did get lazy on this track, lol, LowRider said the same thing, lol.
Thanks for the honesty man and the advice and props.
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