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[mani]

Oh shit gotta again take on that name as a newbie/ But really that's not even close to being true see/ I been doing this shit before it battlin was in movies/ Got heads on my dick like backstage groupies/ I never know which to pick/ So it's mostly all of them usually/ Hopefully it's also tricks on this site/ With some rah digga coochie/ That's cool if ya hang to bust a rhyme/ But I'll help ya cumm multiple times/ And no I ain't taking no multi's in a some of ya lines/ Anyway see I came from the hound house site/ I was getting my little shine under the light/ Had the titles for heavy and middle/ Then someone hacked us for the second time/Go ahead take ya giggles/ I bet some kid from there going off saying Hey where they go with my riddles/ But fuck that I only stay pissed for a little/ Stayed hungrier than them 80's toy hippos/ Keep my shit hard and on point like a bitch in the cold standing out her nipples/ And I see threw a fake clearer than crystal/ I had some issues to finish off before that hackin dismissal/ Nigga name 2gunzup had a problem with me on that ship as the captain/ It was bout to turn into mo than just some rappin/ Was gone have his feet movin with urge like gregory hines toe tappin/ Nigga thought I was jokin, smirkin, and laffin/ But I'm mo than a word assasain/ And a yellow smiley from me won't post no grin/ It'll just be a personal visit then havin his fam and friends pourin out henn/ That's what happens if niggas shit don't stay smooth as a 5th of yak/ They gone have to a mirror at all times tilted to keep a eye on they back/ Even though I'm the type that'll face up front/ I'll fuck up a nigga head like a ounce of laced up blunts/ Niggas candy so if these stars wanna burst/ These bars will chew these runts/ And leave the box in a hurst/ I shine like a southern nigga grill showin off his fronts/ I got a little white gold/ and diamonds in the the lobs and nose/ But I ain't trying to say I stunt/ Still the 101 class I skipped past that grade/ Long as I gets some ass to laid/ And the account shows I got enough to splurge and still have bills paid/ I don't have to drive mainly cuz I'm hardly eva soba/ So I get broads to play everyday as my chauffeur/ I ride the shotgun and put my arm around 'em/ Say some ol' good spit to'em and arouse'm/ It normally stop all the complaints even on that time of the month/ Except when it comes down to telling me which one of my flows is the rhyme of the month

[Stu]

Few words, structure your bars man, reading that will give me a headache.

[mani]

So you are the Mr. Or Mrs. Admin/ My name is Mani yo what's crackin/ You got me laughin sayin my shit ain't structure/ Check any line you illiterate muthafucka/ Like sculptures my shit is a work of art/ Yours is probably just a queef or fart/ Naw I ain't gone even start right now/ Oh yeah thanks for the props on my intro freestyle PAL/ I think

[Stu]

Dont try and diss me son. If you do it, make sure its good and something to step to.
Holla at the admins, for help with your raps if you like.
One

[mani]

Damn are we mad? That wasn't really no diss I was letting you know it was a joke rhyme. If I was going to diss you it would had ate you believe me. And askin for help I definatly don't need far as rappin. Structure? Huh? If you quit rappin 10 yrs. Like me and comeback in 2 months on text and carry two belts the same time. Then you can tell me something. If not your advice is questionable. I already know the routine challenge for those new at a site. And yours ain't workin hardly. Sorry if I'm blunt with it. But I don't bite my tongue for no one. So structure my ass. Sincerly Yours Truly,Mani

[TrYp™]

lol this shit is wack, fuck dis kid.

[Tha Arkitekt]

not feelin it at all
was to damn long
structure was way off*work on that*
but in other it was aight i guess~1~*ark*

[Stu]

Umm, well if you think you know better than me, so be it.
But on the real, you aint even on my level, thats why i aint hit you back.
Sort your shit out and dont run your mouth.
One

[Emcee Sake]

Lol is this cat for real drop lines not paragraphs fool, now while your rhymes are step up from mediocre you could get a rap deal jsut for your attitude

[S.Dios]

y'all arnt even gettin this are you, im not lying you could learn alot from this cat he is very expericned and i can vouch for him, if u seriosuly got a problem come holla at me....1

[Stu]

Who me? or this fool?