friends are lost

[Jay2c]

new shit up

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/8/liljayuk.htm

[Stu]

Beat is not my personal selection.
Good flow and delivery.
Nice quality on production.
Im feeling it man.
One

[Jay2c]

thanx for the feedback.

the beat is dope. dont diss that. :evil:

but thanks for the feedback

[BOFH1971]

everyone has different tastes when it comes to music.

sounds good
I always liked variety tho :)

[Jay2c]

anymore feed

[LowRider]

Beat is aight, quite hard to catch i think..
Flow and delivery is good, nice and clear.
Keep the audio coming mayne.

[Jay2c]

thanx for the feedback.

[J-D]

liked a few lines all gd homeboy

[Jay2c]

thanx for the feedback people

[John Stormm]

nice beat, most definitely feel ya lyrics, but couldve been better wit ya flow..it was on n off at points, im liking the accent (no queer),..so work on ya flow b...keep dropping and return the favor when u see my drop

[Jay2c]

kk thanx for the feedback. u the only person to mention the flow but thanx for the feed

i will return the favour 8)

[LowRider]

kk thanx for the feedback. u the only person to mention the flow but thanx for the feed

i will return the favour 8)

Cough cough, scroll up to Low thank you.!
Nah messin, when your next audio coming\?

[Jay2c]

when i record it :?

nah i dunno when i can be fucked to write and record

[Jay2c]

Bump!!!!

[Lexx]

i like the sample

Wow.. i like it. flow is pretty good (only 1 min in) ---> stopped and actually downloaded-- and i never do that--- okay, starting it over, better not let me down. ha

crushing lyrical potential /
..tears are real sequential/
^nice rhyme scheme thruout here

desperate and defenseless /
... just hate.. relentless/
^ really like how you said that

okay-- got called away 'on business'

but ill listen again, when im done working out-- in the meantime-- you can post the lyrics for us..

much easier... all audio should imo-- if you want good feed.

[SkaReKroW]

yeah devize has dope beats,quality is surprisingly good, lyrics are cool, concept is on poit, flow is on point, that accent is fuckin me up, you shoulda through a hook on this, delivery isnt bad but could still be upped alott, shits not bad actually, i jus hate that acccent.....later

[Jay2c]

^^^^^^^^
thanx for the feedback,
but there nothing i can do about accent can i????

yeah lexx i'll post lyrics ups

[Jay2c]

verse 1

u can hate me, but what can i do but stay true/
even though u try to brake me, i return and hate u/
i cant make u, but u know where the realest comes/
u know where the heats from when i come the streets run/
expectations im exeeding, pushing lyrical potential/
desperations mind bleeding, tears are real sequential/
through these rhymes its evidential, im a hated soul/
some people stayed real, unlike some mates did though/
i try to stay in control, desperate and defensless/
is it just me or is this hating just relentless/
i am feeling friendless, helpless and alone/
lifes turning cold and i want to turn to stone/
the worlds leaving me battered im crying for armour/
but if the worlds a woman, i cant fight back and harm her/
my life was for the streets, u hate my dress code/
hate me and i'll hit back what do u expect hoe/

verse 2

indipendent now, rasing reminiscent brow/
how could i allow, friendships to fall down to the ground/
till alls ground to dust, no more respect or trust/
now when i meet them out i dont expect a rush/
to meet me or to hang round and chill and drink beer/
these doods are all fakes, i think they bit queer/
oh dear, what a shame, i dont give a shit, im to blame/
all i did was hit a cunt and diss his families name/
maybe it was a mistake, but i dont really care/
cus the distaste between us is getting hard to bare/
ultimately i dare, to try and bring us close again/
but is it worth the pain, that could end up in my brain/
the self confiding soul, leaves an everlasing hold/
upon my spirit, expresive lyrics forever known/
i talk through my pain open my heart up to this paper/
but for now, fuck u friend and see u later/

there ya go girl!

[B-mac]

Aight Listening .. I dont like the start of the beat.. Aight.. Nice Mic Presence i like the delivery... Lyrics are tight, Flow is on point you ride the beat well.. Quality is very good.. Good track Homie...

[Jay2c]

thanx for the feedback m8.
i'll give u sum when i get round to it cus im too tired to listen to sum1's tracks then feed.

[Eagle Eye]

aye mate, sorry it took me a while to get round to this, i think i gave u some feed on msn a while back.... k, haha yea i used this beat, very nice! You come in strong, loving ya quality, so clear. Im really impressed with you progression flow and delivery wise, you sounded a bit robotic and tensed up a while back, sounding much more relaxed now, finding your own style. I like this track mate, its cool, keep em coming.

[Jay2c]

thanx for the feed mate all apprieciated

[Jay2c]

Thanx For Feedback People!!!

Uppin Still