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Stu
08-12-2004, 09:44 PM
This is the rough draft, flow is a bit, ehhhh, but when we record it will be sorted.

Lil Jay

He used to be an intellectual, respectable individual/
Started hustling but didn’t know what he was getting in to/
Wanted to be recognised, only to his horror did he find/
His mind be corrupted then he started living lies/
Mixed with chumps who were into crack and blunts/
Needles and stuff, damn this man was a dealers want/
He was fucked and couldn’t kick it as an addict/
Used to be good at sports, now the dumb fucks passed it/
He started to sleep around with all the girls in the town/
Started playing hoes, and treating his girl like a clown/
She was as cleaver as his also with straight A’s/
She was never seen as a beauty cause the teachers gave her praise/
Desperate to get laid, then her boyfriend gave her pleasure/
Beyond measure, then to her pain she became pregnant/
He didn’t know so her became a lost soul with no one to hold/
Thought his girl went away and his relationship went cold/
She didn’t contact him about the disease she contracted/
He fucked another girl and didn’t wear a hat/
Contracted HIV, he couldn’t bare to be seen/
Knowing he fucked a girl whose sexually unclean/
He caught the disease and he was also pleased/
When he heard a rumour that his mother had a tumour/
She supported him and he was everything to her/
His mother died and he didn’t cry, cause his pride deprived his mind/
He also lied to all his friends by saying he was fine/
He heard another rumour that his girl was having a baby/
So he went to see where she has been lately/
She told him that she has got HIV/
That she was pregnant and this made him unhappy/
She fell to the ground as he stormed away in pain/
At the unknown surprise of sharing cells in his brain/
He went home, chopped the rocks and rolled all his tree’s/
Smoked all his shit, then proceeded to OD/
He lay there sprawled out also with a loose jaw/
Paramedics shouting and ready to break down the door/
Flattened the door and then saw the lifeless wreck/
They checked his pulse, but this junkie was dead/

Nasty Stu

She used to be top of the class with straight A’s/
Surrounded by jealousy, intellect and much praise/
It was the summer days/
And this girl wanted to be noticed/
But all her attempts to intrigue a man, was all hopeless/
You had to scope this girl; she changed to a stunning beauty/
The words than fell from her lips became a mans duty/
This once innocent girl, started to hit the sheets on rotation/
Experiencing erotic pleasures and its sensations/
All on different locations/
Swinging between men like a chimp/
Started to chill with the guys and them fools with a limp/
She refused to be pimped though, showing some brains/
Until she met this guy who snorted and jabbed needles into his veins/
But he didn’t remain; he left after they had a night of unprotected raw sex/
Unfortunately this girl could never contemplate what happened next/
At her monthly hospital checks, she found out she contracted HIV/
Knowing that she probably passed it to the boy who smoked a tree/
The once law degree student also found our she was heavily pregnant/
Knowing that she would have to support her inner segment/
She became lost, and tried to return to her mother’s house/
But her mother was disgusted with her, and kicked her out/
Desperate and lonely, she started to hustle money of her previous men/
It was working, until she met up with that crack head again/
She started screaming AMEN, because the child’s father returned/
The thought escaped her decaying weak mind that he had learned/
He caught the disease, and required a explanation/
She told him, but he rejected her in her time of ultimate desperation/
Her destination was the gutter when the father spread the truth/
Broke and on the streets were her only means to raise her youth/
With her heart cold, exhausted she collapsed to the concrete/
Begging for money up to the time the pregnancy was complete/
Giving birth on the street, contracting numerous infections/
Crying out to passing public for the nearest hospital directions/
Later her mind had recollections, of where her life went wrong/
This newly made mom later passed away after a long/
Struggle, but the doctors managed to save the suffering child/
Before the lords trial, she opened her eyes and smiled/
But now this baby child, has gotta go out in the wild/
Alone with no real mother/
No known father and no older brother/
But listen this is just a tale from our true reality/
Another corrupt life and lonely child, from another fatality/
When you see these lifes, don’t be disgusted, just see their trouble/
Because on this world, life is one traumatising long struggle/

Any feedback?

Killa Effect
08-12-2004, 10:38 PM
fire, that shit wuz deep u guys had nice flows goin nice vocab keep spitin

TrYp™
08-12-2004, 10:54 PM
dat was tite styll... keep uppin on ur stuff man

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~TrYp~

Jay2c
08-12-2004, 11:08 PM
thanx for the feedback, much apprieciated. 8)
thanx for the props aswell :D

Stu
08-12-2004, 11:12 PM
Thanks guys for the props. Audio version comin soon.

Anymore feedback?

Lyrical One
03-01-2005, 06:14 PM
i thought it was deep and dope had me focus on that story hard!!

Stu
03-01-2005, 06:16 PM
Thanks. You should check some of my newer material. Better quality.
Thanks again.
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