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wReCkLeSs321
10-01-2005, 10:09 PM
http://hip-hopkings.com/forum/viewtopic.php?t=280

Our presidents demented state prevents smart comments/
Armed bombers take orders and risk their lives for his heartless conscience/
Ton's of martyrs get money off the U.S./
Cause we just bomb them then supply them with food for their stress/
Careless acts from Bush put us in more danger/
Now war strangers become more familiar as we cause more hatred/
Bustin down doors of foreign places ready to fight armed patrons/
Who want our armed patrons to quickly be evacuated/
And stop swarming these foreign gates/
War is hate, no need for us to conduct a murderous fued/
Now persons are abused for their appearance/
cause their ethnicity struck our towers of two/
When power's abused, the results can be disastrous/
Now we pass this torch onto Bush for him to run some more/
this is sick/
Now we gotta deal with four more years of this idiot/

LowRider
10-01-2005, 10:13 PM
Good political drop mayne, im feelin that verse.
Vocab is sick, you got some nice ish in there. Flow is good as wel.
Keep workin on that man, maybe add a second verse if you can keep the same level of consistancy?

Stu
10-01-2005, 10:29 PM
Very nice man, im feelin it, all areas covered and you werent really vague.
Very nice, hard to keep this level though.
One

J-D
10-01-2005, 10:42 PM
very creative man i ilike wot uve dun with the verse

Now war strangers become more familiar as we cause more hatred/
Bustin down doors of foreign places ready to fight armed patrons/

^^
liked this

overall gd drop and gd flow

ThE LyRiCaL PrOpHiT
12-01-2005, 08:59 PM
yo im feelinthis line right here "Our presidents demented state prevents smart comments/
Armed bombers take orders and risk their lives for his heartless conscience/"
that was hot man good way to start it out got me to keep readin

Kruwl aKa Isodope
13-01-2005, 03:13 PM
yea i like doing political drops, i did 1 when board first started, but this was nice. good expression of feelings