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Emcee Sake
11-01-2005, 02:43 AM
Aint not such thing as a suburbonite gangstas
Just a bunch of wannabes and fakers and pranksters.
Understand that todays rap ain't about how fast you can flow
It's about how many guns you own and gang signs you know.

Now here comes the verse designed to make you think
Whose fault is it the black community continues to sink
Is it the fabeled white man who keeps us out of power
Or is it the famous gangsta flashed on the Tv every half hour

Subscribe to the theory that we're all the same
and you'll eventually understand everyones to blame
slavery was major in our land
it wasn't just the white man who played a hand
black sold there own as slaves
and even then people think its only america who is to blame
ships were chartered from all around the world
and just knowing its everyones fault makes my skin curl

So take a look and realize that there is only one hope for us to reach the true prize
We all gotta come together and compromise
but there are some who would refuse
to even listen for even a second to some body elses views
So quit playin this blame game cuz im sick of it
hearing its other peoples fault for our predicament
Understand that we wont get no where by complaining
I swear to god no one understood what King JR was saying
Lift our own hands out to start reaching
I don't care what ya'll say cuz that was some damn fine preachin

http://www.hip-hopkings.com/forum/viewtopic.php?t=670

LowRider
11-01-2005, 09:40 AM
Need to put a link showing you have replied to somebody elses verse.
Read the rules and PM me when you have got the link.
Closed.

LowRider
11-01-2005, 09:43 AM
I have put your link in for you mayne.
Just make sure you do it in the future....

Nice emotion and feelin to the track. You had some tight flows and rhymes, plus the vocab was quite good in places. Only thing missing was some multis really, that would have been phat if you added some, something to work on for the next drop.
Do you do audio?
One1

Stu
11-01-2005, 07:08 PM
Umm, okay nice vocab in places and the flow was good.
The rhyming was played in places and weak, needs to step up.
You could use some multis and punchlines too.
Nice man though, keep elevating.
One

ThE LyRiCaL PrOpHiT
12-01-2005, 08:25 PM
i liked it over all it needs flow to it tho lyrics aint the only that make a verse man but nice keep doin what you do 1