One 4 tha road

[4ize]

I`m the last and first that made the perfect cut
But I`m not the only~one that thinks yo momma`s~a~slut
I`ma punchline behind ...do it so good
I am borned, raized and grewed~up in the hood

I`m a do the perfect cut with a perfect spit
I`m multi~verse in the universal lyrical~freak
I`m your internal answer and mic ballancer sip
And also the scotch~wiskey that glues ya lip
That`s L.I.P like T.I doin` his T.I.P like a G.I
One eye been` a wize-guy
I`m 4-Ize cooking french-fries of ya momma`s pie
Lyrikly aclaimed and posesed by ma feelins
I`m so high...
I look at the flor and see a lot of ceilings
Incredible like the INC. I made`em disapear
I`dd glue`em all together and unders`em of their gear
Like No Fear...leavin` Mystikal allone
In the rap zone the throne is the microphone
But the mic is my drug ... like I gotta gambling problem
Even if you KO my ass ... you`ll neva get to solve~em
But i stick 2 the plan N` i`ma raize to the top
Cuz I`m the last and first that made the perfect cut

I`m the last and first that made the perfect cut
But I`m not the only~one that thinks yo momma`s~a~slut
I`ma punchline behind ...do it so good
I am borned, raized and grewed~up in the hood

[Kruwl aKa Isodope]

http://www.hip-hopkings.com/forum/viewtopic.php?t=749

i liked the beggining but it kinda lost it in the middle. but it was nice, good job 4ize. peace

[Stu]

Okay, you are stepping up your vocab and rhymes man, im liking in.
You need to work on consistency in your verses now.
Also your rhymes and depth could still raise in standard.
One

[wrdz]

a yo man nice wrd chioce u definately do'n big things man keep get'n better. That's what's up.

[LowRider]

Yeah man no doubt, your poetry is cool, just gotta raise ya open mic now, check the battling thread and guide to battling post i did. Get some tips from there and work on them in the next drop. I noticed you startin doin multis now which is good, just keep elevatin mayne.

[ThE LyRiCaL PrOpHiT]

yo im likin that man keep doin yo thing man im new here but ya email me if you wanna collab sometime on a love hit 1

[4ize]

Thanks fo` all ---i appriciate it