Memorize

[4ize]

Memorize ....go back in time ...what got you upset....listen

Once up~on~a~time in place lost from the world
There was a sick~soul that took on him all~the~fault [1]

He was a locked~vault for the sins of the street~drama
He only had a brother and the soft~sholder of his momma [2]

But the boy grew in a week like the others in~a~yeah
But he grew in judgement and he over~lifted his fear[3]

Now he can see reality and he can fight~against~the~system
He resurected and fought back with the ones that opprest `em[4]

He`s now 20 years old and the story is not~still~told
Cuz now he got gutz and he grew pluck and got~bould[5]

Got~bould in the attitude and he struck a mine full~of~freinds
That will stand by his side and be proud untill this sad~story~ends[6]

I MISS MY CHILDHOOD ....SO MANY MEMORIES>>SO MUCH FUN

[Tha Arkitekt]

its aight~1~*ARK*

[Stu]

Not bad man, I feel you are elevating.
Just keep working on it.
One

[LowRider]

I dont understand your multis man.
Do you use ~ when you mean them?

Once up~on~a~time in place lost from the world
There was a sick~soul that took on him all~the~fault [1]

This doesnt make sense, no rhymes and the multis dont work.
Improve bro i know you can step up.
One1

[4ize]

I`ll try 2 keep in mind ...

[vicemc]

True True on the comments, but overall good drop...Take any advice you can dawg...you will elevate...practice using wordplay and throwing metaphores, and work on your multis...I still need to elevate so this isnt hate, just trying to help...peace bro


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