the state f mind when smoking weed

[Cap G]

Listen im just tryin to breath like fab/
since i cant i smoke weed to relax/( i puff a whole bag)
Intill im so hi if i look down i can see aaliya and lopez/( its so sad)
Im goin through hard times to/
so tell me why u hatin on me im no differnt than u/
shit im in the struggle just like u/
the only difference is my dro lite blue/
so u just like who?/
these niggas tryin to get me like b.i/
thats why i get away like t.i/
U see my/
life is a devilish omen/
thats why im smokin plus a gallon of bowens/( im floatin)
And i smoke trees to relieve me/
when it comes to this green leaf/
I keep more green than luwigi/
And u dont like to here to hear this/
I tax weed supplyers which insures i save more on green than the gieco lizard/
so roll up a fat one cuz its hard enough 4 me to relax/
i compose the truth but theoretically my words are a little deeper than facks/
its impossable 4 u to reach where im at/
im in the hood but know more than flies mice roaches rats/
cuz when it comes ta weed im a beast smoker/
I inhale trees and roll up blunts the size of a leaf blower/
instead of eating the cuisine wit the lopster/
my team is a mobster/
pullin out weed thats greener than oscar/
and its reality that lightin is logic/
I take a breath of fresh trees the same color of the spiderman gobblin/


I know u sober minded indivisuals dont understand so i xspect the hate. But to my niggas on the corner pushin white runnin from the cops and tryin to feed they baby boy like me, roll up a fat one, im talkin about the purple or northern lites, i fell u and if u need some fire holla at ya boi im here.

[Cap G]

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[Stu]

Um, interesting, you had a lot of punches in there.
More of an emcee than a poet you are.
I wasnt feelin it as a piece of poetry.
Good drop though.
One

[poeticly_gifted_mami]

that was a good drop i was feelin it keep doing yo thang and keep ya head up.

[LowRider]

Yeah i was appriciating the punches...not really a poetry drop but it was cool.

[Poetic Realness]

This read to me like an open mic actually, it did not have a poetic vibe to it...nevertheless, it was okay, the flow needs work, some nice lines but you still need work...keep droppin...